This hallucination tells me Iโve been here before
something from the shadows creeping toward me
an old friend, or a lost spirit
bringing with it trails of light and color
so much like the sunset I watched melt into the sea
when the wind lay still and the horizon slept among the stars
It was a lullaby sung by a voice in the sky
a magic spell that gripped my mind
and cast it out to the senseless depths
Too far to ever truly return
Far enough that I may never want to
Here sleeps the catalyst that will cleanse the world
where the currents flow in carousel rivers
through the veins of a drowned land
and beside it the first soul to witness retribution
stares up at a distant surface of moving glass
trapped beneath fallen beams of light
and waiting longingly for an end to exile
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As I said in my post yesterday, I read some poems at an open mic for the first time last night. It was a great time! The snow had been coming down hard all day, so there weren’t a ton of people there, which made it more of a cozy gathering than a formal event. Everyone was supportive of everyone else, and appreciative of all the good work that was shared. Definitely going to start doing it more often. Thanks to the BookBar here in Denver for putting it on!
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16 responses to “An End to Exile”
This is beautifully written. So many different emotions are flowing through each syllable.
Wonderfully done.
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Thank you very much (: cheers!
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I think that’s really great, Mitchel! It’s always good to do some public speaking. I hope you continue.
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Thanks Rob! I definitely will continue. I can only hope the pre-jitters will be less and less noticeable with repeated exposures.
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Self consciousness is something you overcome with age. By the time you are 60 years old, you realize that no one was ever looking at you, thinking about you, laughing at you, etc etc. Just one of those things.
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Beautiful words
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Thank you (:
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Freedom or exhile is the enduring question…everyone at truth is interested in the experience that is home.
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Indeed it is!
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That sounds like a wonderful time! And congrats!
Can I ask which ones you read out? Or they are different ones from what you have published here?
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Thank you! I read Wanderer of Twilight Worlds, Further Down the Rabbit Hole, and Fabled One. Theyโre all here on the blog, (:
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I’ll have a look ๐
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What an incredible and scary experience that must have been! Way to go!
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Thank you! (: it was a great time once I got past the nerves
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Lovely poem. ๐
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Thank you (:
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