This dawn rising is new blooded
crowned emperor of things locked away
by the passage of the moon
Threadbare mountains reach to break the sky
and catch dewdrops sweet on bare rock faces
that gather together in long years of waiting
for a chance to take the mountainside
and fall torrential on dry lands below
To rescue the thirsty by drowning them
carry the weak away to faded places
as the red dawn bleeds across the sky
and the world above the flood
becomes like something royal
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Been struggling this week to sit down and actually focus on any work. Finally got myself in front of the story I’m working on and cranked out a little over 1,000 words. Felt great, now I gotta keep the streak alive.
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10 responses to “This Dawn Rising”
Keep writing!
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The first thousand are the hardest, the second thousand are pretty hard too, and after that, it doesn’t get much easier. The reward is worth the effort though. Lemme know if you need a reader.
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I’ll take you up on that when it’s further along! Thank you so much for offering (: hope you’re doing well
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We are well, thank you.
Can’t wait to read it!
This is a strange adjustment we’re making. This pandemic thing is weirdly paralleling an apocalyptic, end of the human race dark comedy story I’ve been concocting for the past couple of years. Lots of ideas, some progress and real time testing of some of the issues I outlined are happening now. Guess I better get to work on it, though I don’t think anyone else will have the same plot line.
Stay healthy!
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Funny how ideas come alive like that. I’d love to reciprocate being a reader for you as well when you finish it! Glad to hear you’re well (:
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Keep going!!
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It’s raining pretty hard here right now, and it fits this piece perfectly, with the wonderful watery metaphors and symbols. Excellent work as always!
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Thank you! Glad it connected to your world in a way (:
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All the best for your work 👍👍
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Thanks! Same to you (: cheers
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