Hills against the wind press on into night
over the peaks and away to the last descent
the sands shifting like a sighing voice
a constant pleading for some refuge
safe harbor from storm wall waves
where the first ones came to pave the way
and went down into sunken depths
Do we follow?
Or do we hold our breath and wait
let the storm tear over us, through us
and gasp in the night when we finally resurface
and taste once more the tallow wax of starlight
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10 responses to “Tallow”
“Or do we hold our breath and wait
let the storm tear over us, through us
and gasp in the night when we finally resurface
and taste once more the tallow wax of starlight” David this is beautiful. “sands shifting like a sighing voice” I love the imagery. Perhaps being home will bring even more creativity to your writing. Love and safety my friend. Love Joni
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Thank you Joni, I certainly hope it does! Cheers (:
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Oh beautifully done!!! Well penned!!! 😍❤️
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Thank you!! (:
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Welcome!!! 🙂
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a must share.
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/15/tallow-mitchell-david-ring/
Cheers. 🙂
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Wow wow wow–knock-me-over good, every word, every line.
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(: thank you Rhen!!
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Welcome 🙂
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