This is the fog that hangs over paradise
across a land where music plays without a source
floating away to find waiting ears and lure them
drag them on a gentle wind over the wasteland
and throw their bodies into a bloody river
And they go with a smile on their face
the song of the wind on their lips
and the voice of a thousand wanderers
who came to their journey’s end at this edge
built a city on a cliff-drop to the sea
and stood waiting for the coming of the storm
so they could tear it down and fall away into the sky
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I’ve never been cliff jumping. I have a feeling I would freeze up when I got to the edge. Maybe I’d be able to push myself over, or maybe not. With anything extreme like that, I usually find that it’s not so bad once it’s been done, so I might!
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Photo by Johannes Plenio from Pexels
14 responses to “Fog Over Paradise”
You write, amazingly.
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(: thank you so much, that means a lot
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So beautiful and impactful. I love how you wrote this. Amazing, amazing piece!
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Thank you!! (:
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Your words flow magically.
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Thank you Ishaan (:
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Excellent as always. Did you take that pic? Wow.
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Thank you! I wish I did, but no. The photographer’s name is Johannes Plenio, and I found it on Pexels. I’ve used several of his photos to accompany poems in the past, he’s very talented.
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Beautiful poetry…I’m always tempted to steal your lines 🙂 No worries–I would always ask permission first.
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I really enjoy the flow of the words. Even paradise can’t escape the fog. Haha.
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Thank you! And I guess so (: cheers
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Beautifully written! I have never been cliff jumping, and I am sure that I would be terrified to do so. Thankfully though I’ve never had any sort of inclination to do so lol :p
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Thank you!! That’s a fair position to take on cliff jumping. I sort of had the chance, but I stayed in the water looking up at the cliff rather than climbing up and looking down. I don’t mind heights, but throwing myself off them might be a different story.
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I feel the exact same way! I don’t have a fear of heights; I have a fear of not knowing whether or not I’ll get hurt -if- I fall. Same reason why I don’t like rollercoasters.
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